I'm super impressed with the talent of this new up and coming singer but I'm disappointed that it doesn't sound so jewish. Ive heard worse, and no it's not the end of the world, but many would agree with me that it's not perfectly fine either. I know there are many different opinions and there is a very wide range of types of people and what they find acceptable. In no way am I paskening halacha, just mentioning something because I feel it is my duty. Please please please try to refine your music and vocals if you're putting out music for frum yidden. May Hashem repay you for your efforts!
Beautiful lyrics, beautiful vocals, very well done!